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« on: April 13, 2010, 11:24:34 AM »

Rather liking this one. Geometric pattens I like and the compression gives it a rather painterly feel. As usual click the image for the lager on black photograph.

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« Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 11:41:51 AM »

Hmm i would crop the left "blank" space. Columns are making nice minimalistic pattern, the light is a fulfillment of the space.
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« Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 06:46:15 PM »

I kind of agree with Ernest. But - OTOH - that "blank" vertical space makes up a logical "frame" and is the counterpoint for the top and right straight lines that enclose the content of the photo.

I like the simplicity and the geometry in this image. As usual in your photos, the darkness makes one's imagination work harder than normally... Smiley
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« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 08:13:39 PM »

Thanks for the comments guys.
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« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2010, 01:57:43 AM »

I too agree with Ernest comments on the left side. I don't think this lends it self well to a square format I also don't like the slight tilt to the colums on the right it looks out of place with the rest of the line that said. I love the shapes and the forms that are created. the colors are perfect and the dark sullen mood is very appropriate. You did a very nice job of capturing this image. nice job.
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« Reply #5 on: April 24, 2010, 12:50:15 AM »

Thanks for the advice. I was thinking of scaling the image to remove the wall on the left will still maintaining the square format.
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« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2010, 07:23:24 PM »

Just to clarify, are you all talking about camera left or stage left?
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