Between Heaven & Earth

[Ernest]

Between Heaven & Earth
Berlin
Sony DSC-P92

[habakuk]

A very graphic shot with interesting lines. The slightly dirty feel of the window and the yellow cast in the glass, suggesting old, dirty, worn material, the descending lines as well as the plant sticking "out of the roof" produces a lost and abandonned feeling for me. If that was the intention, then it works nicely. I am not sure if removing the plant parts would really improve the shot. That definitely depends on the message you wanted this shot to transport.

Overall, I would be tempted to reduce the green cast a bit, but again, the message is the decider here...

cheers
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[eob]

Again, I agree with Roland. And yes, the only thing I would try to improve is the color of the sky. With the emphasis on "try", since this particular color you've got here may be exactly what you've been looking for...

[ilchkai]

i agree with eob in agreeing with roland. this shot needs to be a part of a series - i don't think it is strong enough on its own.

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[Ernest]

Hello
thanks for any suggests on this one. I did it from behind a window inside of a train i was sitting in, so thats why the crop is a bit dirty. Anyways i made some little color fixes in PS to make it... hmm how to say it... a bit more dirty
I like this kind of view. Graphic & dirty. I have some another shots of this kind so i will post some soon.
Regards!

[eob]

We'll wait...