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Theo
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« on: August 31, 2008, 03:32:01 AM »



A foggy day and a birch on a boardwalk what can i say but Black and White. When i worked in a darkroom I was always trying to push my black and whites to this point, what can i say i don't like gray (most of the time). I don't use photoshop plug-ins that offtin but i found a gem it is nik siver efx pro and i love it very much worth the money if you like black and white.

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« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 06:51:17 PM »

Personally, I like this image very much. While my husband feels it's "a bit brittle", I enjoy the minimalism -- the open space, horizontal/vertical emphasis in the composition (with some angles adding a dynamic), purity and variation of line, and emphasis on texture; reminiscent of a woodcut.

I was wondering how to present it on one of our walls. Maybe sandwiched in glass only, so it floats on white. Smiley

[img] I don't use photoshop plug-ins that offtin but i found a gem it is nik siver efx pro and i love it very much worth the money if you like black and white.

Just today, another image caught my eye which was processed with that plugin (in a completely different way); I just might have to spring for it.
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« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 10:51:06 PM »

Now, Theo, I can see that you are a trained graphic-designer...

One thing I like about this composition is its near symmetry. I often say that I like a strong graphical quality in a photograph, but in this case, I look at your image as if I was looking at a purely graphical illustration. There's not much left from the original photo, therefore, I don't really know if I can comment on your image (since I've got only a very limited graphic-design training). I am sure, though, that others can give you more valuable comment than I could possibly muster.
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« Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 11:51:06 PM »

Thank u both for your "q" I am going to take that i'm a trained graphic-designer in a good way eob Smiley. as for any of you comments would be welcome even though your graphic training is limited. april your "q" was refreshing thank you and when you said putting it in a floating frame kind of made me think of something i tried alongggg time ago might try this on this image that is to print it on a over head paper and put it in a floating frame could be interesting. you should at least try that software april its a real nice put togeather for a plug-in.
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« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2008, 03:33:39 AM »

I usually try to capture the very first few intentions that arise when I look at a newly posted photograph. This so often gives me an idea on how the shot worked it's way into my brain...  here, it was a trying to split the picture. Split ?, you may wonder...

Well, I think it's a really strong scene. The harsh treatment brought out the graphic qualities and it reminds me of a rapidograph painting done by a really proficient painter. But it feels too obvious, too planned and conceptual. Don't get me wrong: obvious, plannedn and conceptual is no bad thing. As I said, these are my initial reactions before the conscious analysis and judgment kicks in. So, next though is: how would I go from the obvious state to the state I personally would prefer here?

And after trying quite a while, I came up with the idea of cropping it much more tightly from the bottom. Yes, I am brutal enough to ask for the removal of the reflection of the tree. That leaves a splendid pattern from the railing, a very ncie reflection on the water and the tree standing there, lonesome and seemingly looking out into the vast space. Would it be a different shot then? I guess so.

If I now take into mind what the others have reported, I think the floating weightless on a huge white wall would be a real alternative.
Smiley

Great shot, Theo.

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