This photo along with your Spoiler... is pretty cool!!!
I know that you have gone through a good bit recently, as well as I... mine with my mom. I listen to her stories of life and see where they fall in this grid... I was on the phone with her when I viewed this photo. She is fighting Lung and Breast Cancer right now, and she is telling us all about her life... both good and bad... so this grid makes a lot of since...
From a technical aspect... its spot on for me... I don't see any uneven lines, no distracting markers, its all pretty nice...
Its a photo that after reading your text, you scan and reflect back on your own life... makes me feel good that with all thats going on in my life, the little set backs are nothing more than a rock in my grid, but that only helps hold in the moisture for a pretty flower to poke through the dirt soon!!!

Can't really find anything i don't like... BUT... with out the text, I would find this photo nice, but boring. I would have to try to come up with a meaning on my own, and after i would sit for a few minutes trying to figure that out, i would loose intrest...