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Theo
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« on: April 02, 2009, 02:56:00 AM »

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Theodore Black
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« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2009, 01:03:04 PM »

THis one doesn't work for me at all. THat's a big contrast to the N°1 which has a very strong impact on me.

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« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2009, 04:37:16 PM »

As much as I like to use a square format myself, it doesn't seem to work here. I would cut off about 1/4 of the bottom part. That would help me concentrate on the place where the real action takes place.
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« Reply #3 on: July 23, 2009, 06:38:04 AM »

i'd be even more drastic - chop off the bottom half and get rid of that green cast. there is something i really like about reeds - there is motion and movement in them. the one, single, smaller runner towards the right of the image brings the composition together (if chopped in half, that is).


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« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2009, 06:31:48 PM »

the one, single, smaller runner towards the right of the image brings the composition together.

Oh, yes! My first impression is of heaviness, compared to what I typically respond to about grasses in the wind. But that one single focal point as a contrasting note is poignant.
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« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 08:27:17 PM »

It's let's beat up on Theo day. Okay... okay... I'm always easily whipped into a mob...

I'm also having trouble with the color mapping here Theo... It seems like LAB color which just doesn't rope me in. Something uninviting about it. Darn I wish I could be more specific. Sorry.
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