daisy II

[Theo]

[eob]

Nice shot, but...

First of all, I would change the view point so, that the flower on the right edge would move towards the center. That way, there would be a nice repeat of form and pattern between that flower and the defocused one in the background. And secondly, watch your focus, Theo...

[aprilS]

This is fun, for me. I don't mind the rightmost flower falling out of the frame, because it makes me imagine activity beyond that boundary. And I especially like the "umbrella" of the farthest flower, containing the other two. That is brilliant, I think.

However, along with eob I wish for more sharpness in just the center of the forward flower.

[habakuk]

I dont have to add anything to the two statements. But I'm more with April about the flower on the right side. I don't feel bothered, it's more kind of a invitation to imagine the flower field extends to infinity to the right side...

cheers
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