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aprilS
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« on: October 05, 2009, 07:06:41 PM »



Larger.

An archetype, difficult to title.
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« Reply #1 on: October 05, 2009, 11:55:43 PM »

How about "The Army Of Neptune"? Maybe a bit corny title?   Cheesy

I like this shot for a simple but dynamic composition and interesting color palette. The shot exudes mystery and works on my imagination.
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« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2009, 08:11:07 AM »

The colors, the lines, also the implied ones, really work strong here. I'd probably cut off a bit from the top to make it easier to stay with the implied lines in the center of the photograph.

I like the way the green elements take me on a ride into the depth of the scene...

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« Reply #3 on: October 12, 2009, 05:48:13 AM »

I like the title, but I liked shot more Smiley Great use of the green patches, just leads you to the center of the image. Great shot really.
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« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2009, 12:22:51 AM »

converging lines, hint of megenta and blues and the bold green. What can i say love this the detail lets me spend a lot of time and.....
just really impressed i wouldn't do anything to this at all except hang it in my living room.........

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« Reply #5 on: October 13, 2009, 08:05:25 PM »

Thank you each very much for your comments.

"Army of Neptune" took me in a direction I hadn't considered.  Cool Akin to "soldiering", but in a mythical sense.

Re cropping the top, I agree that area is problematic but am not sure I want to make it easier to stay within. For some reason, I'm very attached to that upper left green... Perhaps because it also leads out?
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