This composition is built entirely upon the effect of the linear perspective and - therefore - it produces a very strong visual impact.
I see a couple of points in the image that conspire together toward working against that strong impact. First is the fact that the lines of the overhead and the concrete platform do not go straight to corners of the image. There is a
perceived lack of synchronization between them. Second is an excess of the negative space both on top and on the bottom of the image. I think I would crop this shot into a square, getting rid of the empty space above the building on the left and all the concrete platform below the point of junction on the left with the edge of this shot.
What do you think? Do not hesitate to defend your point of view. We are here just to help each other...
