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Theo
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« on: October 13, 2009, 12:08:24 AM »

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« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2009, 06:12:30 PM »

There is an awful lot of information to try to organize here, and I can appreciate where (I think) you're going with the three zones.

But...I'm not sure it's successful. The bright areas in the bokeh upper right -- even though they are leaf shaped -- draw my eye quite a bit, so I can't fully enjoy the underlying circular forms that contrast/echo the main wave.

Then I notice the hard edges on twigs left, and think "solarized." A viewer who is not a photographer might not apply that term, but they might feel there's something artificial about the image.

Then again, the first syllable of that word is "art"...
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« Reply #2 on: October 25, 2009, 12:46:43 PM »

In general, there's something very stark and gothic in this murky image. For some reason, I am reminded of Albrecht Dürer (very loosely). That mood/perception draws my attention to the details and then, like April, I notice those solarized edges - and I realize that that's what helps to make this stark mood.

OTOH, the light spots in the background definitely work against a cohesive composition. I would try to clone them out with some more subdued tones that you have plenty of in this image.
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