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Theo
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« on: October 13, 2009, 12:30:23 AM »

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« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2009, 02:27:32 PM »

Even though I really like to use a square format myself, in this case, I would crop off all the bottom part up to the point where the "crest of the wave" meets the edge of the frame (on the right side), leaving only a hint of watery reflections in the left lower corner. That way, my attention would be brought immediately to the sharp leaf without being scattered about. Perhaps, I would also crop off a bit from the top - just enough to get rid of that light oval-shaped reflection in the center...
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« Reply #2 on: October 19, 2009, 07:49:44 PM »

What most captivates me about this image are the inky depths -- so heavily liquid -- and that one leaf improbably suspended.

Though I love the sparkles on the upper leaf, and can appreciate the contrasting flow, I'm tempted to do some serious editing and eliminate entirely.
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« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2009, 08:06:41 PM »

I am with April here. The tactile quality is stunning. Stark contrast. However, I would most probably also try to crop differently. Not sure where I'd end up... but a it's worth a try.

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