Fractured

[aprilS]

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Woodland

I have a question, but will hold it in reserve so as not to influence your response.

[eob]

I see logic in color palettes, but I am somewhat puzzled by the interplay between forms/shapes (especially in the second photo). That part looks a bit chaotic to me...

[aprilS]

Thank you for your comment, eob.

Puzzlement is what I hoped would intrigue. (The images were photographed through a pseudo kaleidoscope.)

Too, a feeling of chaos is what appeals to me in #2—wild things growing all jumbled together in the woods, and the need to look carefully to discern order.

If the results create unease instead of interest, however, then they are not successful!

My other concern was appearing too contrived.

Thanks again.

[fourth]

I like the first one a lot. The colours and shape remind me of ice which I think allows the prism to create a certain amount of logic within the space. I think the second one misses that link at least for me. But the first one is a winner.

[Theo]

Love both of them wish though you would have posted them in separate threads.
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  I think the colors and composition it right on i love the shape of the triangle that directs your attention to the images that look like butterflies.
woodland
  This image for me doesn't hold the same as the first I like the colors but don't feel the focal point is that interesting as always I love the style but I think you missed your mark on this one.

[aprilS]

Fourth and Theo, thank you very much for your feedback on these.

Though remiss in acknowledging, I do appreciate your comments as food for thought!